8. 2017/10/14 00:14
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>>7.Voronkov Michael
Thanks:)
7. 2017/10/13 22:59
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Cool
6. *2012/12/24 23:21
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>>5.Ромм Михаил Григорьевич
>With the lost cheering ability, one still could weep.
That's what remains.
5. *2012/12/24 22:51
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>>4.Яр Надя
>Some echoes of the poetic in me remain, but I lost the greater part of it with my ability to cheer for the man in the poem. It was a part of my youth - which is gone - I suppose.
With the lost cheering ability, one still could weep.
4. *2012/12/24 22:44
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>>3.Ромм Михаил Григорьевич
>Indeed, the very phrase "I was a poet then" could be viewed as a mono-verse
Some echoes of the poetic in me remain, but I lost the greater part of it with my ability to cheer for the man in the poem. It was a part of my youth - which is gone - I suppose.
3. *2012/12/24 22:26
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>>2.Яр Надя
>I was a poet then.
Indeed, the very phrase "I was a poet then" could be viewed as a mono-verse (not sure if it is the right term in English, моностих in Russian).
2. *2012/12/24 22:45
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>>1.Ромм Михаил Григорьевич
>"When the storm came, he was the storm." - this is especially telling. A human or the nature, everything together indivisible, with liberty and justice perhaps.
Yes. I do now wonder how I could view what was coming (to them, the people in the poem) as some sort of justice. But I did, and it shows.
>One thing that interests me in the English verse is how an author decides whether to write it all in one line or "vertically". There is no rhyme, the length of the lines varies. Perhaps a line ends where a long pause is, not sure. It would be good to learn.
Well, there is some rhyme in this poem - at the beginning and the end. I created it riding on pure intuition and made the lines playing on rhyme, rhythm and pauses. As far as I remember it came naturally, I didn't have to work much. I was a poet then.
1. *2012/12/24 21:45
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"When the storm came, he was the storm." - this is especially telling. A human or the nature, everything together indivisible, with liberty and justice perhaps.
One thing that interests me in the English verse is how an author decides whether to write it all in one line or "vertically". There is no rhyme, the length of the lines varies. Perhaps a line ends where a long pause is, not sure. It would be good to learn.