16. * (less.less@mail.ru) 2010/05/21 00:06
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спасибо вам за такую поэзию, новичкам, вроде меня будет с кого теперь брать пример, а не писать всякую муть, вроде моей, с уважением Александр Ч.
PS. может что нибудь посоветуете, как понимающий в данной области?
15. (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2005/04/16 17:45
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>>14.Письменная Арина Валерьевна
>>>11.ta
>>>>10.Письменная Арина Валерьевна
>thank you for inspiration! gotta write something first... ;)
the best thing i figured is waiting)))
but i'll take my chances.
14. * (arina@pismenny.com) 2005/04/15 07:15
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>>11.ta
>>>10.Письменная Арина Валерьевна
>>Faith will bear the hunger,
>> Hold the faithful pursuit,
>> Will restrain all the younger
>> Among utterly mute.
>>
>>
>>
>>Mutilating the younger,
>>Washing fingers in blood,
>>Sinking guilt and compassion
>>'till the very last shot.
>>Mute, in dust, on the ground
>>For subconsciousness' sake,
>>Silence's deep and profound,
>>Almost dead but awake!
>(an indistinct whisper): kinda brilliant...
>Thanx so much... to hell with etiquette))) i'm impressed. Gotta read more of you.
thank you for inspiration! gotta write something first... ;)
13. (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2005/04/13 08:04
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>>12.Voronkov Michael
>My hat goes off to both of you. One detail is evident. Subtle, but nevertheless evident. One verse is energetic like champagne and the other has thoughtfulness of a good European wine. Sorry for breaking in ;-)
got too much attention, blushed already. but i thank u))) Out of loud: i like the verse. Aye, that one (below))) And the pleasure is all mine.
12. (m_voronkov@yahoo.com) 2005/04/13 07:20
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My hat goes off to both of you. One detail is evident. Subtle, but nevertheless evident. One verse is energetic like champagne and the other has thoughtfulness of a good European wine. Sorry for breaking in ;-)
11. (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2005/04/13 06:28
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>>10.Письменная Арина Валерьевна
>Faith will bear the hunger,
> Hold the faithful pursuit,
> Will restrain all the younger
> Among utterly mute.
>
>
>
>Mutilating the younger,
>Washing fingers in blood,
>Sinking guilt and compassion
>'till the very last shot.
>Mute, in dust, on the ground
>For subconsciousness' sake,
>Silence's deep and profound,
>Almost dead but awake!
(an indistinct whisper): kinda brilliant...
Thanx so much... to hell with etiquette))) i'm impressed. Gotta read more of you.
10. * (arina@pismenny.com) 2005/04/13 03:29
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Faith will bear the hunger,
Hold the faithful pursuit,
Will restrain all the younger
Among utterly mute.
Mutilating the younger,
Washing fingers in blood,
Sinking guilt and compassion
'till the very last shot.
Mute, in dust, on the ground
For subconsciousness' sake,
Silence's deep and profound,
Almost dead but awake!
9. * (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2004/12/21 03:20
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>>8.Кегани Олегович
>lack of time as well?
>мда)Да, немного)))
Но праздники тоже когда-то заканчиваются. Придет и наш черед)))
8. 2004/12/17 21:14
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lack of time as well?
мда)
7. (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2004/11/12 19:59
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>>4.Voronkov Michael
>M-mda, all quiet on Western front...
not quite so
:))))