11. (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2005/04/13 06:28
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>>10.Письменная Арина Валерьевна
>Faith will bear the hunger,
> Hold the faithful pursuit,
> Will restrain all the younger
> Among utterly mute.
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>Mutilating the younger,
>Washing fingers in blood,
>Sinking guilt and compassion
>'till the very last shot.
>Mute, in dust, on the ground
>For subconsciousness' sake,
>Silence's deep and profound,
>Almost dead but awake!
(an indistinct whisper): kinda brilliant...
Thanx so much... to hell with etiquette))) i'm impressed. Gotta read more of you.
12. (m_voronkov@yahoo.com) 2005/04/13 07:20
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My hat goes off to both of you. One detail is evident. Subtle, but nevertheless evident. One verse is energetic like champagne and the other has thoughtfulness of a good European wine. Sorry for breaking in ;-)
13. (as_if_me_here@yahoo.com) 2005/04/13 08:04
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>>12.Voronkov Michael
>My hat goes off to both of you. One detail is evident. Subtle, but nevertheless evident. One verse is energetic like champagne and the other has thoughtfulness of a good European wine. Sorry for breaking in ;-)
got too much attention, blushed already. but i thank u))) Out of loud: i like the verse. Aye, that one (below))) And the pleasure is all mine.
14. * (arina@pismenny.com) 2005/04/15 07:15
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>>11.ta
>>>10.Письменная Арина Валерьевна
>>Faith will bear the hunger,
>> Hold the faithful pursuit,
>> Will restrain all the younger
>> Among utterly mute.
>>
>>
>>
>>Mutilating the younger,
>>Washing fingers in blood,
>>Sinking guilt and compassion
>>'till the very last shot.
>>Mute, in dust, on the ground
>>For subconsciousness' sake,
>>Silence's deep and profound,
>>Almost dead but awake!
>(an indistinct whisper): kinda brilliant...
>Thanx so much... to hell with etiquette))) i'm impressed. Gotta read more of you.
>thank you for inspiration! gotta write something first... ;)
the best thing i figured is waiting)))
but i'll take my chances.
16. * (less.less@mail.ru) 2010/05/21 00:06
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спасибо вам за такую поэзию, новичкам, вроде меня будет с кого теперь брать пример, а не писать всякую муть, вроде моей, с уважением Александр Ч.
PS. может что нибудь посоветуете, как понимающий в данной области?